God of All Things pg 12 -- from THE BOOK OF LIES

God of All Things pg 12 -- from THE BOOK OF LIES
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12th Mar 2015, 4:00 PM in God of All Things -- in THE BOOK OF LIES
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buffylove 12th Mar 2015, 4:00 PM edit delete
buffylove
GOD OF ALL THINGS -- a heart-broken boy sets out on a terrible journey...


Story by Paul A Newman --> my DevArt account --> http://paul-a-newman.deviantart.com
Art by Victor Moura --> see his DevArt account for more of his work --> http://vicmourahimself.deviantart.com
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buffylove 12th Mar 2015, 6:30 PM edit delete reply
buffylove
Now that the God of All Things has refused Amaque, what should Amaque do?

And now that I'm looking at it, maybe that final balloon would look better toward the top of the panel (the fun of trying to learn lettering as you go)...
melaredblu 12th Mar 2015, 10:29 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
I think having the balloon at the bottom works, since that's the final note of the page, but maybe you could have moved the last panel aside a bit and put in an extra panel with the God of All Things in a close-up, maybe a profile shot of his mouth, saying "no". That's just one possible approach, of course. Your approach still had an impact on me, for the record. Said impact being along the lines of "I keep clicking 'next' and there's no more! WHY is there NO MORE?!"
Zimriel 16th Apr 2016, 10:47 PM edit delete reply
This proves it. Rorschach is God.